I agree the angle is not 100% ideal coming into the fairleads. The bullseye fairleads do not care much about that though. They line things up right in front of the cleat. Your "Wire loop" should perform a similar function, but maybe not at as tight of a tolerance. After sailing in other boats, and dealing with foresails on similar sized boats, I kind of wish I had thwarts... Would make things a tad more tidy of the jib sheet cleats were there.
At any rate, I like the setup. Yours should make the boat a lot more fun to sail. I remember when the jib sheet cleated off on the opposite coaming of my boat. It required nothing short of a "round house" kick in any decent amount of wind... to cleat or un-cleat. It just plain sucked, and there were scary moments where I crossed an already over powered boat to try and get the damn thing loose
